Late review again.
I will make this simple, because I don't like making it complicated.
I do not know much about hip hop, this will come from personal opinion alone.
That arp strings in the background doesn't match you song at all.
Or it could be that the arp isn't in sync with the drums.
Your saw/square wave thing in the background seems major detuned to me.
That is all I got for you.
You are talented.
I am not very skilled at reviews but, something I caught was that your percussion seemed a bit
quiet. This is just my opinion though, and I am no master.
Yes, the percussion are a bit quiet, but I decided to not cover up the main theme with percussion, and to instead let the hits act as a support instead of a rhythmic lead, as the melody and hits are different rhythms.
Also, making the drum louder would lead to a bit of crackling, which is never fun. :/
Thanks for the review, I will try to work in making some more involved percussion in the future.
I wish I could review this but it creeps the heck out of me...
I see a images of huge bloodshot eyes everywhere just blood thirsty.
..ughhhh..
Maybe put some thunder in the background hehe.
At the end your should gradually increase the tempo that would be a cool ending...
I probably late on this review am I right?
With the review..
I will make this look like a professional review. Even though it will just be my bad advice.
Good things:
You put in less decay good job.
Ending isn't so abrupt good job.
Bad things:
Can't hear piano very well. Too bad,
Think you have a bit too much attack on the strings. Too bad.
Umm...that's all i got for you...pretty sad isn't it?
From your mightiness Supaman321.
oh hey there man, been a while. i have been so busy lately so i have not checked this site often. Thanks for the review, very informative. Dont worry about "professional" this is what you feel.
Hmm yeah, the piano was a little low.
Not sure about the strings. But yeah, i see what you mean. thanks :D
i'll be uploading another song soon, tonight(?)
It'll be called "Red String", and that will be the full finalized of this song. :)
So...I want to say this is a really good song, but I have to be honest here.
I think you went overboard with the decay in the background. It sounds as if
15 notes are playing in the background. It kind of ruins the song.
And the end is kind of sudden.
Well, lets be positive here: at least you don't have the drums too loud. And the
"new instruments" sound pretty nice to me.
Don't make my bad comment stop you from making more songs though...
LOL it was a just a random thing. yeah the decay is a little too much.
when the song is finished i think you'll like it :)
thnx for the review :D
Interesting, G-meister.
Yet, very average.
If by average you mean 'I used to have a torso but your rapefunk melted it from my skeleton' then yes, 'tis quite 'average.'
I don't know if I am experienced enough to give advice but...
The song itself is pretty good, but in my opinion the bass/kick drum and snare is a bit overkill for the song.
That is just my opinion on that...
Really nice though.
LOL your pretty experenced enough :)
yeah i felt similar about the drums. i'll look more into it :) thanx for the review :D
aww that was so beautiful. Don't think I am a girl though.
thanks a lot man :D
It is OK, but that ticking was driving me nuts. You should probably look at that. Especially at the beginning.
I don't why, but I can tell, this song is going to give me nightmares. Lucky at around 3:00 it isn't as scary. This would be a good theme for a horror film. That is my opinion.
If you were going for scary. Good Job!
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