That was very well composed. I liked it. Very nice job!
That was very well composed. I liked it. Very nice job!
Awesome! Rated 5! Very well mastered.
Wow, The chords at 3:30 are really nice.
Very well done!
Very nice =)
I really love the intro! It is so well composed!
Or maybe I am just a sucker for piano arrangements...
Thanks :D
Yeah this is one of my favorites.
Still have it in a "to finish" pile
You are a very good writer, but in my opinion your drums really overpower everything else.
Also, I think you are playing to many things at once.
I think your writing skills are just going overboard lol.
LOL they probably are. And this song was back when i didnt know how to master a track properly.
Maybe i'll redo this one
Thanks :)
More Telephone.
Needs more Telephone.
Nice one Bryce.
You really love the telephone.
Umm, I see a problem.
If I am hearing correctly, your volume is being cut off because it is too loud, causing it to distort a little,
and go out of whack? Trying lowering the master volume, or using compression? And I think you need to settle down a bit on the drums there LOL. This is just my opinion. And Sorry for that late review.
LOL yeah this was just me fooling around :) thanks for listening tho.
Wow you are pretty talented in the way of the pencil. Unlike me.
Is this a song of love? Aww thats cute.
I seriously suck at writing lyrics, so can't give you any tips in that area.
Well i guess in some places in your song, the bass drum overpowers the strings.
I'm not experienced with compression yet, but I "think" that might help.
I am not some musical genius here, just some guy at the corner trying to help you out.
Improvement once again.
haha thanks :) yeas, im a writer. LOL i love writing. I only started making music cause my friend suggested it cause i used to rap. He told me to try and get the beat i had in my head out. but i cant get the hang of the music thing :( but still trying :) yes. this was for a girl :) a very sweet one
edit, LOL i think im gonna redo this one. one of my favorites of my own so far
pure beast
this song is very cooel.
very well made, bryce
thanks buddy! :_ ))))))
I don't why your other songs got higher ratings. In my opinion this is improvement.
Or maybe it is because I really love the strings in the background cuz im like that.
I only think the piano is a little high pitched. Maybe lower it an octave?
Your reverb problem is almost non existent now. I am glad.
The biggest improvement is instrument choice. It isn't just random instruments out of a bag.
Have a nice day, and I hope to see even more improvement like this.
haha thank you so much supaman :D that actually means a lot to me :)
Yeah, i loved the strings in this one too :) and awayy with the reverb.
The piano is a little high pitched. :/
Thanks again, improving all day erry day.
Thank you for being there :D
Have a good day to you too
And i have a new song on the way. stay tunedd
I play piano and create music on Fl Studio.
Age 27, Male
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Canada
Joined on 5/15/09