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That was very well composed. I liked it. Very nice job!

Awesome! Rated 5! Very well mastered.

Wow, The chords at 3:30 are really nice.
Very well done!

Very nice =)
I really love the intro! It is so well composed!

Or maybe I am just a sucker for piano arrangements...

HalalAngel responds:

Thanks :D
Yeah this is one of my favorites.
Still have it in a "to finish" pile

You are a very good writer, but in my opinion your drums really overpower everything else.
Also, I think you are playing to many things at once.

I think your writing skills are just going overboard lol.

HalalAngel responds:

LOL they probably are. And this song was back when i didnt know how to master a track properly.
Maybe i'll redo this one
Thanks :)

More Telephone.
Needs more Telephone.

Nice one Bryce.
You really love the telephone.

Umm, I see a problem.
If I am hearing correctly, your volume is being cut off because it is too loud, causing it to distort a little,
and go out of whack? Trying lowering the master volume, or using compression? And I think you need to settle down a bit on the drums there LOL. This is just my opinion. And Sorry for that late review.

HalalAngel responds:

LOL yeah this was just me fooling around :) thanks for listening tho.

Wow you are pretty talented in the way of the pencil. Unlike me.
Is this a song of love? Aww thats cute.
I seriously suck at writing lyrics, so can't give you any tips in that area.

Well i guess in some places in your song, the bass drum overpowers the strings.
I'm not experienced with compression yet, but I "think" that might help.
I am not some musical genius here, just some guy at the corner trying to help you out.
Improvement once again.

HalalAngel responds:

haha thanks :) yeas, im a writer. LOL i love writing. I only started making music cause my friend suggested it cause i used to rap. He told me to try and get the beat i had in my head out. but i cant get the hang of the music thing :( but still trying :) yes. this was for a girl :) a very sweet one

edit, LOL i think im gonna redo this one. one of my favorites of my own so far

pure beast
this song is very cooel.

very well made, bryce

bryce responds:

thanks buddy! :_ ))))))

I don't why your other songs got higher ratings. In my opinion this is improvement.
Or maybe it is because I really love the strings in the background cuz im like that.

I only think the piano is a little high pitched. Maybe lower it an octave?
Your reverb problem is almost non existent now. I am glad.

The biggest improvement is instrument choice. It isn't just random instruments out of a bag.
Have a nice day, and I hope to see even more improvement like this.

HalalAngel responds:

haha thank you so much supaman :D that actually means a lot to me :)
Yeah, i loved the strings in this one too :) and awayy with the reverb.
The piano is a little high pitched. :/
Thanks again, improving all day erry day.
Thank you for being there :D
Have a good day to you too
And i have a new song on the way. stay tunedd

I play piano and create music on Fl Studio.

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